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Re: Untitled 11-6-05
She speaks with every woman's mouth, bending words and wisdom love hides underneath pressed linen in her dark cedar chest festering and growing tired she doesn't touch the lock she ...
Nov 6, 2005 -
Re: the machinists
Thank you dear. CL
Nov 6, 2005 -
Re: Untitled 11-02-05
thanks Soni. cheers CL
Nov 6, 2005 -
Re: lighting never strikes twice
Thanks guys, and EBM I didn't even noticed I even rhymed. cheers CL
Nov 6, 2005 -
Re: the kid with the gun is my neighbor
thanks guys for the loverly reviews... oh wow...I am so dyslexic in my notebook 'god' is 'dog' "I pledge allegiance to the flag of the united states of america....one nation, ...
Nov 6, 2005 -
Re: This is where I was Wednesday Night...
I was in the front row, right next to the stage of the San Miguel Wintercase Concert, three bands played: The Delays, The Go-Betweens and Teenage Fanclub, totally one of ...
Nov 4, 2005 -
Re: Untitled 11-02-05
she finds herself beneath the waves that ripple across the expansive, open sea her skin pickled from the briney immersion she's tried to kill herself before something only small-child-spaces know ...
Nov 2, 2005 -
Re: lighting never strikes twice
lighting never strikes twice (this) left me wondering why genius strikes ligting quick with all the force of Vesuvias the chalkboard scratches are scars of purest silk, milky against the ...
Nov 1, 2005 -
Re: the machinists
the machinists the touch at first is tentative then curious, as flesh meets flesh and all coherency is aborted the tumble of babbling springs forth into the clamy, damp air ...
Nov 1, 2005 -
Re: Baby Doll
baby doll she takes his kisses no matter what whether they be a slap on the cheek or the press of coldwhite knuckles she surrenders her body lax under the ...
Nov 1, 2005 -
Re: the kid with the gun is my neighbor
the kid with the gun is my neighbor the two-colored eye man watches over the domain of the 3-legged dog whose limp is stiff from metal-pronged puppet strings daytime suburia ...
Nov 1, 2005 -
Re: Sylvia
Sylvia If you look through the dipping boughs of the elm trees you can see the glittering patches of light that is her genius hidden beneath shadow layers of cotton ...
Nov 1, 2005 -
Re: Solarwinds: (Mars is Where the Heart Is)
Dedicated to Ari, Bobo, Psy and Sureal - now don't you feel special now? Read my first two chapters if you haven't already, and reviewing will make me eternally yours. ...
Oct 31, 2005 -
Re: Solarwinds (First Two Chapters, fixed and edited)
Thank you to everyone who helped out with this: Sureal, Bobo, Ari, Psy, Greg, and others. Please comment I am such a review whore. Check out my next chapter, it ...
Oct 31, 2005 -
Re: Jacko's
I really didn't know where to put me and my friend went to this bar Jacko's, and just started writing. Its one of those your write 3 words, the next ...
Oct 23, 2005
